Time To Shine (Review)

Welcome folks to my series Spongy Reviews! Where i take a look at a episode or Spin Off episode right hre on this wiki! Ok it's time to kick off the show by reviewing the ADWSS episode Time To Shine!

Review
Hmm i had really bad grammer back then.......
 * T.V:  Hey You!. Yes you with that Cuppa In your hand. Do you have what what it takes to win Bikini Bottom's Got Talent. Contestants from around the world come to participate to win Prizes.....

Wow a bit agressive isn't he?
 * T.V:  From a Cash Prize of $1000000 to the One and Only Chance to perform in front of the Royal Family. That's right. Now even the Queen get's to see it. So don't just stand their. Get moving!!.

Squidward is being grumpy as usual.....
 * Squidward: I am so gonna win that cash prize even if SpongeBob is there to annoy me to no end.

Hmm this doesn't make sense.....
 * SpongeBob: Remember at the very beginning it showed us 2 dialing the phone in 2 screens?. Well 1 of them was me.

Another cheesy reference to The Great Snail Race....
 * Presenter: Squidward Tennisballs?.


 * (Officer John comes by)


 * Mr Krabs: What was that Squidward?. I coudn't hear you.

Wow i would have thought Squidward would have been much stronger.....
 * Squidward: *ulp*. Yes Sir.

Ok this really does not make any sense.......
 * Plankton: Ok i really hate people singing other than really myself but even i kinda liked it.

Actually you can but it........Ok you can't.....
 * SpongeBob: But they're no mirrors. And it is impossible to see your own face.

How did he get in here?
 * Officer John: Ehem!. (Taps Squidward on shoulder. Squidward turns around)


 * Squidward: Ugh! That's it. He will not win when i crash his party. Hehehehe. (Crickets Chirping but Squidward has  suddenly gone).


 * Cricket 1: I love my Job

Overused. I need to stop making lame crickets mock at Squidwards jokes....... The joke cracks me up but i think it might be too agressive. Also how can he survive without having to go to the hospital. In fact why is he limping anyway? He's a Sponge and Sponges are immune to punches. Check out The Bully in the real show and you will see why. Despite my grammer i did make some awesome jokes.... He can get beaten up to the point of limping but yet survive being chocked on a marshmellow? I really need to learn more logic when i am writting episodes........ Hang on your acting like you don't know him yet you threw him out 2 minutes ago! Why is Officer John doing most of the work? Also how come the judges did not notice it? For a G and PG Spin Off i am promoting a lot of violence......... Come on it's blatenly obvious he's not SpongeBob! Why would SpongeBob be green unless he wants to vomit!? Yeah they are bad at recognising him........... I don't know why i wrote that........ Now i am bad at defining laws of physics!! I thought the cuboard was locked? How the hell does he know that there late? I don't see him wearing a watch? Ok this is a sudden end to a episode. It almost looks like it was rushed. But the episode ends as well as this review. Thanks for reading guys and i hope you enjoy. Like it? Then don't forget to check out hundreds of other Spin Off reviews coming soon where your favourite Spin Off episode or episide in general is reviewed by me! Goodbye folks and i shall see you on my next review. Bye now!
 * Cricket 2: So do i
 * Squidward: Psst. SpongeBob i know a secret that will make the Judges go wild. Wanna see?.
 * SpongeBob: Sure. (He walks behind the curtain where Squidward beats him up until he is broken). Wow that's some secret. (He limps to the microphone. 3 minutes later title card flashes).
 * Squidward: Why you little Son Of a (Dolphin Noise) (Officer John comes by)
 * Officer John: Ahh i understand why now. Not only are you disgrace to society but you're also a bad mouth loonatic. In fact come with me. I know a place where you will get along nicely (He takes him out to a Trash Can and dumps him in) There. Better?. Good. (He heads back inside)
 * SpongeBob: I will now be singing Fish Times By George Swordfish.
 * (Squiward throws a marshmellow into his throat)
 * Squidward: HA!
 * (Spongebob get's up, swallows it and continues playing)
 * Officer John: Well well well. Another one?. Good now See you later (He kicks him out and closes the door)
 * (Squidward Grabs Spongebob and throws him out to the trash. Officer John swaps the people around)
 * Squidward: Wow that was lame. Ok i shall do something that will bound to get him to fail. (He pictures it in his mind). Ohohohohohoho.
 * Squidward: Oh Spongebob would you like some tips on how to sing better?
 * Spongebob: Why?. Im perfect.
 * Squidward: Well don't you want to wow the Judges?. becuase that's what i'm here for.
 * Spongebob: Hmmmmmm....Ok (He follows Squidward to a cuboard. Squidward's covers him with Tape on his mouth and glues him to a chair)
 * Mr Krabs: Me boy?. You feeling ok?. You look all green coloured.
 * Squidward: Why i feel....(High pitch) Why i feel fine Sir.
 * Sandy: Why does your voice feel kinda funny?. Is that really you?.
 * Squidward: (High Pitch) Well don't be silly Sandy of course you know me.
 * Mr Krabs: Spongebob. What is your Great Great Great Uncles name?.
 * Squidward: Ummmmmm......Arthur?.
 * Mr Krabs: Hahahahahahaha. I don't think so.
 * Officer John: (Heading to stage) Ill take it from here Eugene. (He picks up Squidward and literally throws him far away into the Bikini Bottom Jail).
 * Sandy: Spongebob?. Spongebob!?. (A Muffled scream is heard) There he is!. (He opens the Cuboard and rips the tape off). Spongebob you're alive!!.
 * Spongebob: Thanks guys. I don't know what i would do without you....
 * Mr Krabs: (Interupting) Oh my Barnacles. Let's go were gonna be late!!.
 * Sandy: Hes right!.
 * Mr Krabs: Spongebob. Welcome back me bucko. You win the Bikini Bottom's Got Talent. Congrats.
 * Plankton: What they say is pretty much what i say. Congratulations!.
 * (Evreyone starts Clapping. The episode fades and ends. Wow it is a long one.)

Results
Total: 7/10

Grammer: 4/10

Jokes: 9/10

Story: 7/10

Writing: 7/10

Pros
Funny script. Jokes were portrayed well to make me laugh. Good length and decent story that ties in well with the title. Good moments in the story.

Cons
Grammer has seen better days. A lot of the points don't make sense. The laws of physiscs and logic have not been taken into account. Page is extremely messy.