User blog:Softest Boi/Gavin's Fanon Sins : Squid the king by Cosmobo,

Hi there, and welcome to Gavin's Fanon Sins, which is where I jokingly criticise a fan-fic of this wiki. My comments are in bold. Let's go!

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One day at the Krusty Krab mr Krabs had 1dollar missing from his table so he screamed SpongeBob came to mr Krabs and the door hit,Squidward and the,next day at hospital Squidward,looked really hansom then king Neptune came in and looked at Squidward he was that hansom that king Neptune made him king so everyone in Bikini Bottom had to gather around the new king,SpongeBob and Patrick,had to go out of Bikini Bottom forever SpongeBob had a,plan that he new ,would work so he went to his best man at the prank store to get invisible spray then they went to house,fancy to make Squidward appear in the special so they could distract Squidward then SpongeBob went in Squidwards house and got the keys,to Bikini Bottom SpongeBob then opened the door to Squidwards attic and got the crown Squidward then came and told everyone that they had to shut up but they didn't listen because Squidward didn't have his crown SpongeBob went in to,the hospital when he,saw king Neptune Squidward then ran in to the hospital then SpongeBob sprayed the invisible spray over him and Patrick so Squidward couldn't see them then they gave the crown to king Neptune and said,please can you stop Squidward banning us from Bikini Bottom and king Neptune did it and then everything was normal

'''No paragraphs, bad spelling, grammar, and punctuation. and all-around badly written. +70 sins'''