User blog:Cosmobo/Cos's review's are back!

You may not remember the old reviews but I am back!. My first review is about some grammar in a review. Let's get started!.

It's time for another review from Spongy Reviews! Where i review and comment on different episodes from Spin Off's and regular episodes. Let's start with the episode Channel Crossers from the show Channel Chasers. Let's dive in!

Review
SpongeBob:going to work at the krusty krab la la la frying all day long!

Umm SpongeBob flips patties he doesn't fry them.... Also not being funny but the grammer needs improving...

Do you think that is funny?. Grammer? what is grammer?

[shows SpongeBob bump into a truck]

SpongeBob:woah what's this doing here?.

Well you should know.....

Why????

Mr Krabs:Spongebob me lad your late!

SpongeBob:OH MY GOSH LATE?!

[shows SpongeBob faint]

Mr krabs:SPONGEBOB WAKE UP!

[shows SpongeBob wake up]

Why would he faint? He has never done that in the real show. He would either cry or not seem to care....

This is fanon...if I copied everything from the real show there wouldn't be a show!

[shows SpongeBob wake up]

'''SpongeBob:I'm sorry mr krabs! I soiled the good name of the krusty krab!'''

'''Mr Krabs:Spongebob todays a special day! we need ya!'''

'''SpongeBob:need me?! I'm special?!'''

Mr Krabs:yeah of course you are now go and get ya spatula!

Hang on a minute he faints, wakes up in shame probably about to cry and now he is acting like it's the best day of his life! Make up your mind!

Because Mr.Krabs has cheered him up again

[shows SpongeBob pull out a chest from his bumb]

Mr Krabs:what the barnacles?

[shows SpongeBob pull out his spatula from the chest]

SpongeBob:so what now?!

This doesn't make sense. Also how is it even possible?

Watch I'm your biggest fanatic...

Mr Krabs:ugh in the caravan some guy named Joe has the scripts!

'''SpongeBob:great! aye aye mr krabs!'''

I thought SpongeBob would have been surprised but that's just me.

Surprised about the name Joe? ugh why?

Squidward:Look no further just behind you is the most fantastic magical place in the [sighs] sea

Wow Squidward is even grumpier on T.V! You don't sigh on a commercial. You just don't.

He did before in a episode of the "real show"

Mr Krabs:yes the krusty means krustalicous!

The Krusty doesn't mean anything you dolt! It only makes the name sound better.

Its a commercial he's not going to say oh yes the krusty means nothing!

'''Mr Krabs:I know! and its only for the price of 10 dollars!'''

Patrick:gee that's not a lot!

Clear irony right there.

SpongeBob:just call 1394837 to get our new takeaway!

Don't you mean. 1394837653? Theres not enough numbers for it to be a telephone...

What about on a Bikini Bottom phone?!

Director:ok that's a role!

Mr Krabs:so?

Director:I hated it!

Mr Krabs:what?!

Wow he's a arrogant bitch isn't he?

Yes

'''Mr Krabs:exciting stuff?! magic?! I have no money for that!Im not even paying you!'''

It's free though............

Patrick:I'm pretty hungry...

'''Mr Krabs:wait! you can buy a krabby patty for the price of 10 dollars!'''

Patrick:I don't have that kind of money!

Even more ironic now.........

Mr Krabs:ah ha part of the commercial!

SpongeBob:mr krabs?

[shows Squidward walking into the krusty krab]

'''Squidward:Mr Krabs why am I here in the middle of the night?! isn't the krusty krab closed?!'''

Mr Krabs:it is!

Makes absolute no sense at al........

It does

Mr Krabs:come back or Ill make your life more of a misery!

Squidward:how?!

[shows mr krabs pull out some keys]

Mr Krabs:by giving spongebob and Patrick the keys to your house!

'''Squidward:how did you? !ok! Ill come!'''

I'm pretty sure threatning an employee is illegal.......

Yes and not paying an employee is...and threatning? threatening!

'''SpongeBob:hey squidward? want some popcorn?'''

Squidward:let me think about that...no...

SpongeBob:ok just tell me if ya get hungry!

Hang on where's the T.V sucking them in and them browsing through shows etc? Nothing to do with the plot (At least so far...)

Oh so you would like the story to go like this?

SpongeBob: a commercial!

Mr Krabs: WERE IN A COMMERCAIL FOR KELPO!

Sandy: In the TV!

[THE END]

BUT NO!

Mr Krabs:this!

Squidward:really?my little pony friendship is magic?

[shows the advertisements come on]

Welcome to the world of Bronyship my friend....

Squidward:you called us over here so we could watch a commercial?!

Mr Krabs:yes!

'''Squidward:that's it! I'm going to get some sleep!'''

'''SpongeBob:yeah just a commercial?! we should watch a movie!'''

Mr Krabs:great idea spongebob!

I'm pretty sure waking up employees at the middle of the night is also illegal......

I'm pretty sure that it's a cartoon

[shows thunder hit the top of the krusty krab]

[shows the TV go off]

Mr Krabs:oh fish paste how can we fix it now?!

'''Squidward:aw too bad! now see ya!'''

What's with all the shows this and shows that? I'm sorry but you don't have to keep repeating yourself you know....

'''SpongeBob:I've got my new phone! I can call the bikini bottom TV repair men!'''

'''Mr Krabs:no that'll take to long! and will cost too much!'''

Cheapskate......

Yes, he is...

SpongeBob:sandy can you come to the krusty krab we need he...

[shows Sandy come running in with a fire extinguisher]

Sandy:wait there's no fire...

You can't just assume it's on fire Sandy. Think first......

Sandy:this shouldn't be hard...

[shows Sandy pull off the back of the TV]

Mr Krabs:ow watch what your doing with that TV mrs!

Mrs? She isn't married or at least she hasn't revealed it to us! Truth or Square doesn't count.

[shows Sandy put the back back on]

Mr Krabs:how did you?!

[shows the TV turn on and off]

Mr Krabs:we can't deal with this!

The worlds smartest squirrel can't even fix a T.V!? Come on!

[shows everyone start trying to fix the TV]

This show is promoting gobbyness. If you don't know what that is then go figure.

Sandy:get all off!

You need to rephrase this.......

Why?...

[shows thunder hit the krusty krab]

Mr Krabs:let me!

[shows the TV going fuzzy]

Mr Krabs:uh oh...

Dude since when does thunder make the T.V go wonky? It's lightning that does it! (Unless i'm mistaken and i make myself look like a fool)

Stop correcting my grammar! i? i'm? I and I'm

Sandy:I told you you shouldn't!

[shows the beam zap everyone]

Squidward:what the?!

Sandy Mr krabs Patrick and SpongeBob:OH NO!

How is that even possible from a bit of thunder? You need to think about science.

Corrected it

[shows SpongeBob,Sandy,Patrick,Squidward and Mr Krabs in a kelpo box]

How can they fit in a small kelpo box? It would be impossible.

How can they? shrink!

[shows spongebob see they are in a bag]

SpongeBob:were in a bag!

Sandy:kelpo?

Patrick:boy I'm hungry!

How can they change from a cereal box to a bag instantly? You need to think a bit more in logic.....

SpongeBob:uh oh!

Sandy:were in the TV!

SpongeBob:in a commercial for kelpo!

And they don't know how they got in? So it's pretty much saying "Oh were in a T.V i don't care about that"

I

SpongeBob:uh oh!

[shows everyone fall on a table]

SpongeBob:we need to get out of here!

Sandy:quick!

Hmmm doesn't sound much of an ending......

But this does and it's the end of the review. I hope you enjoyed it as much as i did and i shall see you next tine in my reviews for more fun and games as well as opions. Goodbye from me and i shall see you on the next review!

Results
Total: 6.5/10

Grammer: 3/10 Actually my turn Grammar: 1/10 I didn't spell stuff wrong...you have...

Story: 8/10

Jokes: 8/10

Writing: 6.5/10

Pros
Great story. Jokes work well in the story and the plot makes sense. It has some interesting moments and some interesting diolauge. (Dialogue) I WILL NO LONGER HAVE YOU DISSING MY GRAMMAR SIR!

Cons
Grammer needs improving. Some points don't make sense. Take into acount (Acont? is that supposed to be account?)of all the sciene (Science) YOU CAN'T EVEN SPELL SCIENCE?! and other facts behind some scenes before you start writing it. And you too.