Talk:Pilot (Literally)/@comment-28729193-20180102230129

Just going to give a little advice here. I made changes to the transcript. I feel that the writing could use some improvement. I found a few swear words in the script. I don't hate cursing by any means, but I see the series as a kid-friendly TV show and we have to keep this series curse word-free.

But still, I think we're off to a good start.