Thread:Chrisvader1234/@comment-4975464-20130112065941

I absolutely loved your beginning, but I just have one note. The story is supposed to be about Plankton's machine exploding, sending a shockwave through the town, therefore reversing time, only for Patrick to not be affected. The timeline in your story goes back five years, which is great. But the beginning doesn't contour to the plot? Should we change the plot to fit the beginning story or should we change the beginning of the story? 