Thread:Sah2001/@comment-24438956-20170607225504

I have seen your episode "Social Security" from the series "Vernal & Juanita" and would like to give a couple thoughts on it. All of the faces have no shading on them - their skin is one colour, their hair is one colour, etc. and the borders of the curved lines are very rigid and need smoothing. I also see that very basic fonts such as Times New Roman and even Arial are being used in most text and that the frames are very zoomed in onto people's faces. Your voice cast also seems to consist of solely yourself, and in some other shows such as Harley Carley, your family members as well. The intro music for some episodes seems as if it is made with presets in a basic DAW or it is just stock music, and there is no music in the actual episode which makes things seem empty.

However, I am interested in your channel and think it has potential. Therefore, I'd like to help out with it. If possible, I would like it if you could upload the frames for a Vernal & Juanita episode for me to optimize (I would fix colours, smooth out curved lines, maybe some shading, etc.) to Dropbox or some other site with the same function. It could be Episode 1 or 2, or even an episode still in the works that I could optimize for you. Once I have optimized the frames I will show them to you and if you like them I would gladly help you with future episodes.

I also have experience in music, having produced in FL Studio for several years now, so I might be able to replace stock music (or if you're making it yourself, I could give you advice). However, don't count on this, as a catchy, pop-esque theme song is far from my music style.

Since I work on music, I also have a microphone of fair quality that I use to record demonstrations of the vocals for my vocalists (I don't use my actual vocals because I'm not the best singer, but I do demonstrate what I want the singing to sound like to my vocalists this way), and this means that I will also be able to provide some voice acting.

I can also write the episodes, and this will be the most comfortable thing for me to do as writing has been my hobby since I was a child.

While I would love to help you with your show, please keep in mind that at times I might be unavailable because I am busy with work - however, since every bit of help you can get right now counts, I hope you still consider me for your show.

Thank you for considering me! 