User blog:SuperFanon'D!/Fanon Reacts To Kidboy Reacts To EPISODE 3

No rating, AGAIN!? So, I was reading articles and in recent activity there was this spin-off.....

''No rating? Doesn't matter, really. No episodes have been written yet and therefore it would be impossible to decipher the rating anyway. Also those sentences should swap places. +2 FAILS!''

My life as a ghost
'''No..... capitals except the first word....... OK, instead of reacting to the newest episode, I'll react to the spin-off article.'''

''What's odd is that you didn't mention you would be doing the article, not the newest episode. Did you copy-paste this here and then realize that and go "oh welp don't want to do much more work so I'll just put this here"? Yep. But c'mon, at least put that notice at the beginning! And don't be harsh to this article. It was made by a fairly new user that might be underage (no offense, rockbottom789) and maybe doesn't have the best grammar, and he specifically said not to react negatively to his spinoff. And the way you used those elipses makes it seem even MORE insulting. But grammar-wise there shouldn't be an elipse between "No" and "capitals". +5 FAILS!''

My life as a ghost is a humor-horror spin-off created by the user rockbottom789.

'''Whoever heard of a funny horror show? Again no capitals used for the name. Atleast it's not as bad as calling SpongeBob Spongebob.'''

''You're not that smart are you Kidboy? A funny horror show does exist. It's a mix of comedy and horror. And god's sake, do we have to go over the whole "capitals" thing again? Atleast isn't a word. And if you can't even spell why bother criticizing other's spelling? And calling SpongeBob Spongebob isn't so bad. +5 FAILS!'' '''A picture, what can I say about this? I can barely read the writing on it.'''

''Are you blind? It says "My life as a ghost". Again, negatively speaking of his spinoff. And I find it so funny you said "what can I say about this?" and then say something about it. :P +3 FAILS!''

PLOT

This spin-off freatures Plankton,Patrick and Spongebob in an alternative universe in which these characters are ghosts due to an unknown cause.

'''Freatures? Spongebob? Didn't we just cover this?'''

''No, you didn't cover that. And you referred to yourself as "we". You consist of one person, not multiple. Again speaking negatively of the spinoff. +3 FAILS!''

LOCALITATIONS

'''I know the creator does not speak English as his/her main language but, come on! And also, why a section about locations? I won't even bother reacting to the rest since it's just locations and episodes. See the rest of the page!'''

''God's sake! Stop speaking negatively of the spinoff. You said his grammar was so bad that you assumed his main language wasn't English and you didn't even bother reading the rest of the spinoff? That is just COLD. Despite the fact you said "I won't bother reacting to the rest since it's just locations and episodes" I think you just did it due to the grammar. That's just about what would be in your average SBFW spinoff page and it's perfectly normal. And lying to cover that up? That makes it even worse! And now grammar wise: in the first sentence, the comma should come BEFORE the word but, not after it. And in the third sentence, you referred to the article as "the rest" but that phrase could indicate many other things and it is misleading. "I won't even bother" is an informal phrase. And as for the last sentence, the sentence says "See the rest of the page" and the entire sentence is linked to the page. However, the sentence should say "See the rest of the page by clicking this sentence!" because it could be misleading and the link could be anything. That sentence is also a demand and it should actually say "You can see the rest of the page by clicking on this sentence!" +11 FAILS!''

Next Time
What should I react to next? Give ST another shot? Or maybe try Absorbent Days? I don't even need to react to anything on Wikia! Leave your suggestions in the comments below!

''So you can't even bother getting a simple episode format for your blogs? This should be the Trivia section. The second and third sentences are sentence fragments and do not give enough emphasis to apply with grammar rules. The fourth sentence does not fit in to the paragraph and sounds somewhat rude. And the last sentence is a demand, it should say "Please leave your suggestions in the comments below!" Plus, you forgot to indent the paragraph. +7 FAILS!''

And so the total fail count is:

36 FAILS!

The fail-o-meter gives us an average of:

32.5 fpe (fails per episode)!