Talk:Chronicles of Infinite: Ch. 1: One year ago./@comment-5917948-20150612170226

I really like the narrative style you've got going on here. There's a few grammar issues here and there, but it's still very comprehensible and the style is something fresh and unique, a breath of fresh air. Good job so far! You've still got a good way to go, but I'd say that this is a good start to your writing career here.