User blog:RamDarre/Let's Point Out Everything Wrong About: A New Town, A New Sponge

'''Hello kids, this is the Critical Ram reviewing the article A New Town, A New Sponge written by none other than MrScience12. However we cannot let him off of the hook without addressing several issues. '''

This is meant to be a joke blog series.

Where do I start? In the places place! Clearly these need to be capitalized! ​In the trivia section, come on man. That leaves me with a thousand questions!
 * SquarePants residence
 * Star residence
 * Though they are shown, the burglar's purpose for robbing the Krusty Krab is not revealed.

[forcibly shakes SpongeBob by the trousers only to send him flying to the Krusty Krab's dining area without his pants]

Distrubing much?

Rated G - General Audiences This article is rated G, meaning it is appropriate for all ages.

With these kinds of mistakes, this shouldn't be appropriate for little ones! They will learn improper grammarization and capitalization!